Title: Pretty on the Outside
Author: Ninette Vosloo
Publisher: Pegasus Elliot Mackenzie Publishers
Publication Date: February 22, 2018
My Rating : 3⭐
Pretty on the Outside is a really interesting story of two girls Rocket and Sachi, who meet at a carnival and how is their friendship going to affect both of them.
I liked the plot of the story. And the climax was quite unexpected.
But it seems that the story was written in a hurry. The story is too short to focus on the important parts. The climax part was abruptly finished. Events kept happening one after the other making it a bit chaotic.
I was unable to feel the emotions of the characters or relate to them.
There were some grammatical errors as well. But that doesn’t affect the reading experience much.
I believe the story is not supposed to be a short one and could have been easily expanded into a novel. Explaining the events with more details would have made the story much better.